Saturday, 21 February 2015

The Solitude....


The impish grin!!!
A hellish union
Conspiracy on the roll 
Dreams crumble
Sanity on toll 

The stinky cage
Dungeons of desolation, He fears
Try not to flee
The shushed whisper, He hears

Loser, Loner
The words ring
The escapade
A wishful thing

The Armageddon
The trumpet blows
Life infused
A radiant glow

Cage walls crack
Shushed warns fade
The dawn's refulgent beam
Orange and red

The freedom
He devours
The triumph
He basks
Speaks to self
All thoughts merged
The blissful splashes of solitude
The soil of loneliness purged!!!

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23 comments:

  1. alan170422 February 2015 at 00:35

    Dungeons of desolation - This sends a chill down my spine, a real sense of lost and redemption. Love the way it comes alive and holds no punches.

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  2. Mary22 February 2015 at 06:26

    That last stanza is powerful. I like the implied thought that loneliness (which is a negative) can change to solitude (which is a positive.) A thoughtful poem.

    (And thanks for visiting Poetry Jam! Hope to see you again....and also hope you enjoy the poetry of others here.)

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    1. Susmit22 February 2015 at 13:37

      Thanks Mary! Yes, I tried to convey that.

      And, thats for sure, I would love to enjoy the writings of the many prolific guys from Poetry Jam

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  3. Amrit Sinha22 February 2015 at 11:39

    The mood swings in the poem, and the depth it captures ... brilliant :-)

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    1. Susmit22 February 2015 at 13:38

      Thanks Amrit! So happy that you dropped by.

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  4. Sumana Roy22 February 2015 at 12:15

    solitude is indeed healing leading towards happiness...beautifully captivated...

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    1. Susmit22 February 2015 at 13:39

      Thanks Sumana for the wonderful prompt, and for the kind words !

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  5. Anonymous22 February 2015 at 23:25

    Solitude is very powerful. I can related to this since yesterday itself after India blasted South Africa in Cricket, AB De Villiers mentioned he needs to be alone to think over what happened...and i am sure they will come back strongly.

    Thanks for beautiful punches.

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    1. Susmit23 February 2015 at 08:19

      Thanks Alok! Ha ha ha...Yup, AB needs to do that.

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  6. roopz22 February 2015 at 23:55

    The Freedom!

    Regards
    Village Girl

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  7. Maniparna24 February 2015 at 01:29

    "blissful splashes of solitude"......I just loved this line... :-)

    Solitude is a magic potion. It helps us understand what we are... :-)

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  8. Maniparna24 February 2015 at 01:29

    "blissful splashes of solitude"......I just loved this line... :-)

    Solitude is a magic potion. It helps us understand what we are... :-)

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    1. Susmit24 February 2015 at 05:01

      Thanks Maniparna for the nice words!! So glad, you dropped by.

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  9. Anonymous24 February 2015 at 22:17

    lovely poem!! i love how u weave a story and im glad it has a hopeful end! :)

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    1. Susmit25 February 2015 at 11:56

      Thanks Meghana! Those words, coming from you, mean so much.

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  10. Intelliblog25 February 2015 at 08:26

    There is a strong Gothic feel to this, Susmit, which makes for satisfying reading.

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    1. Susmit25 February 2015 at 11:59

      Thanks Nicholas! Nice to know, you liked it.

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  11. Unknown26 February 2015 at 23:45

    Very nice post. Good job here.

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  12. Susmit27 February 2015 at 13:28

    Thanks Kahkashan!

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  13. Anonymous3 April 2015 at 19:11

    wonderful lines Susmit :)

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