Sunday, 24 May 2015

Sweetheart!



Black clouds of ennui
Restlessness of a fly
Synonymous with thee
Neither excited, nor doomed
Words fail to innervate

 Your name, the Outlier
Queasiness nailed
Corneal spangle
Lather of Happiness
Love it is!
The variable, 
Quadrants fail to accomodate
Grows, 
And it grows, exponentially....

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24 comments:

  1. Maniparna24 May 2015 at 17:53

    The first line captivated me totally... 'black clouds of ennui' ...and yes, love is that much powerful to transform even a depressing ennui into happiness... :-)

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    1. Susmit28 May 2015 at 04:07

      Words of appreciation from you is always special....Thanks Maniparna!

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  2. Myrna R.24 May 2015 at 20:33

    This is a beautiful love poem. It is very original despite the fact that there are so many love poems written. I enjoyed it very much.

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    1. Susmit28 May 2015 at 04:09

      I'll hold onto this comment for long.....Thanks Myrna!

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  3. Anonymous25 May 2015 at 19:42

    beautiful Susmit... have you ever tried your hand at a Haiku?

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    1. Susmit28 May 2015 at 04:12

      Thanks Archana! I would love to, though a bit skeptical... Wonder, how you all do wonders, pouring your heart in those 3 lines. Brevity is an art, as they say.

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  4. Unknown26 May 2015 at 16:22

    Blunt...there are very few male bloggers who write awesome English poetry, Amrit was one that I was so impressed and yours is captivating...will come back for more. The language lucid and beautiful and ideas conveyed so well...applaud you Susmit :)

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    1. Susmit28 May 2015 at 04:19

      Oh my, this is one of the best I've received so far... it just cannot go better. An absolute pleasure, you stopped by. I'll keep on trying....would love to have you here more, Shweta!

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  5. Marian28 May 2015 at 15:35

    Interesting... Lather of happiness!

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  6. Sanaa Rizvi28 May 2015 at 20:13

    I loved the opening lines to this exquisite poem.. it captivates the reader.. :) beautifully executed..!

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    1. Susmit30 May 2015 at 12:33

      Thanks Sanaa! Read your memoir at poets united, it was awesome.

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    2. Sanaa Rizvi30 May 2015 at 12:42

      Thanks for stopping by my blog :)
      Glad you liked the memoir! :D

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  7. Rosemary Nissen-Wade29 May 2015 at 12:53

    How lucky we are that love does that!

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    1. Susmit30 May 2015 at 12:37

      Yeah, you need to be lucky to get the splashes of love....So glad, you stopped by, Rosemary!

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  8. Amrit Sinha31 May 2015 at 11:33

    Nothing can be better than love growing exponentially :-)

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    1. Susmit1 June 2015 at 18:16

      So nice to have you here, Amrit! Thanks for the kind words.

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  9. Kaasja1 June 2015 at 20:30

    Amazing post my dear <3 !
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  10. Unknown2 June 2015 at 00:57

    Lovely poem with beautiful opening lines. Loved the expression 'lather of happiness' to describe love. :)

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    1. Susmit2 June 2015 at 04:23

      Thanks for the appreciation, Somali! So glad, you stopped by.

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    2. Susmit2 June 2015 at 04:25

      Thanks for the appreciation, Somali! So glad, you stopped by.

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  11. Saru Singhal2 June 2015 at 19:09

    If it promises love and happiness, doesn't matter what proceeds it. Beautiful poem.

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    1. Susmit2 June 2015 at 23:19

      Thanks for the kind words, Saru! It's always nice to have you here.

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