Friday, 3 April 2015

Final week to B school....



7 more days
The friends will finally meet
All in a frame, 
Worked into a frenzy
An excitement, none can beat
The chance to add that fiery brand
Long cherished and dear
The odyssey is the enlivener
Game for the fun filled year

 A heavy billowed heart, 
Calling family a bye
The cheerful greet, The sweet embrace 
Repairs the melancholy
Crafts the relationship pie

 Hand in Hand, we will march
And in chorus we will sing
The pledge to back each is the totempole
Apprehensions get a ding

A deal to keep the flame alive
To walk the sinuous wire
Few bottlenecks might exist 
But we will wade through the mire

 The end beckons, 
And we cruise on
The resplendent orange flame bombards the sky
Signalling a new dawn....

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45 comments:

  1. humbird3 April 2015 at 22:49

    Feels like completed course, class, graduation...happy feelings and all life ahead! ~ So be it! ~ Thanks for visiting my blog :)x

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    1. Susmit3 April 2015 at 23:44

      Thanks for stopping by, Humbird! You have a lovely blog.

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  2. Outlawyer4 April 2015 at 08:30

    Good luck! Sounds like a wedding in the offing! k. (Manicddaily)

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  3. Amrit Sinha4 April 2015 at 17:55

    All the best :-)

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  4. Mary4 April 2015 at 18:46

    Enjoy that new dawn!

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  5. Maniparna5 April 2015 at 03:24

    All the best Susmit. Enjoy the world beckoning to you. Loved the way you've expressed your parting feelings... :-)

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    1. Susmit5 April 2015 at 04:54

      Thanks for your wishes, Maniparna! And those words of appreciation, coming from you, mean so much. It truly gives me the courage to keep on writing.

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  6. Sumana Roy5 April 2015 at 09:18

    So be it...my best wishes :)

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    1. Susmit5 April 2015 at 10:15

      Thanks Sumana! So glad, as always, you stopped by.

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  7. Gemma Wiseman5 April 2015 at 13:54

    Love the images of "billowed heart" and "flame...signalling a new dream." Beautiful.

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    1. Susmit5 April 2015 at 17:18

      Thanks Gemma! Nice to know, you liked it★

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  8. alan17046 April 2015 at 00:12

    LOve how you make this so alive and full of energy, well done

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  9. Sanaa Rizvi6 April 2015 at 02:01

    Very vivid and full of palpable energy..!! Beautifully executed!

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  10. Sherry Blue Sky6 April 2015 at 03:17

    I am only guessing but this sounds like perhaps graduation day, with all the excitement and emotion? I love that "new dawn" beckoning. It will be one of promise, I just know it.

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    1. Susmit6 April 2015 at 17:14

      You are quite close, it's time to hit the books again at B school. Thanks for your wishes, Sherry★

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  11. Alok singhal6 April 2015 at 03:27

    Good luck, keepers of the flame. I am sure the moments will be cherished all along :)

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    1. Susmit6 April 2015 at 17:12

      Let's hope so..Thanks for your wishes, Alok★

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  12. ZQ6 April 2015 at 06:08

    very nice!
    ZQ

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    1. Susmit6 April 2015 at 17:10

      Thanks RK! Amazed, you stopped by...so happy★

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  13. Anonymous6 April 2015 at 06:44

    amazing.

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  14. Gabriella6 April 2015 at 07:07

    As students there are many things we pledge to do. Future has other plans in mind.

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    1. Susmit6 April 2015 at 17:08

      That's so true, Future is really a rough business

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  15. C.C.6 April 2015 at 07:27

    Love the determination in this...to wade through the mire no matter what life may bring!!

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  16. Mary6 April 2015 at 07:31

    I like the idea of keeping the flame alive!

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  17. Panchali6 April 2015 at 11:10

    Lovely!! There is life in every breath …Cruise on...Good Luck, Susmit!!

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  18. Jae Rose6 April 2015 at 18:24

    What a battle school and learning can be...I loved the orange..it seemed to gently coat the whole poem

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    1. Susmit6 April 2015 at 21:31

      Yup, it is a battle without bloodshed. Orange is the colour, I'm hooked to. Glad, you liked it Jae★

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  19. Unknown6 April 2015 at 21:06

    This made me miss my school days...Well written! All the best for the new beginning! :)

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  20. Gen Giggles 6 April 2015 at 23:06

    Yes its hard but fun.

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    1. Susmit7 April 2015 at 00:16

      Yes, in for the game. Thanks GL for stopping by★

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  21. Kokila gupta7 April 2015 at 01:14

    Yeah Susmit.. keep the flame alive .. the bottlenecks will fade eventually ..:)
    All the Best :)

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    1. Susmit7 April 2015 at 01:36

      I'll surely try to do so. Thanks for your wishes, Kokila★

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  22. Intelliblog7 April 2015 at 12:40

    Ah, how wonderful to see education being likened to a brand being lit, Susmit. As William Butler Yeats remarks: "Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire."

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    1. Susmit7 April 2015 at 14:55

      That's such a wonderful quote, let me bookmark it. Thanks for the nice words, Nicholas★

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  23. MeenalSonal9 April 2015 at 10:46

    Moments relived by your poetry :)

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    1. Susmit10 April 2015 at 23:36

      Thanks Meenal! Glad, you felt that way.

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