Monday, 17 August 2015

Absence!



The wistful heart
Gloom whipstiched
Weeps for your absence

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19 comments:

  1. Indrani17 August 2015 at 21:46

    The essence of agony is there.

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  2. Maniparna18 August 2015 at 02:24

    Absence is too hard to bear, sometimes! Nicely penned... :-)

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    1. Susmit18 August 2015 at 10:14

      Yups, gets unbearable. Getting those words of appreciation is always so motivating, Maniparna!

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  3. Outlawyer18 August 2015 at 05:02

    Gloom definitely can take over longing as you describe. Thanks. K.

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    1. Susmit18 August 2015 at 10:16

      Yes, it does, at times. Thanks for stopping by, Outlawyer!

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  4. Sanaa Rizvi18 August 2015 at 18:38

    Sometimes the absence of someone dear to us tears at the heart.. fills the soul with gloom.. as we hope to see them.. once again.. soon!
    Beautifully executed.

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    1. Susmit18 August 2015 at 22:36

      Thanks for those nice words, Sanaa! Glad, you stopped by.

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  5. Susie Clevenger19 August 2015 at 09:50

    Such melancholy...missing someone is one of the hardest things..

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    1. Susmit19 August 2015 at 11:12

      Yeah, it is tough. Thanks for stopping by, Susie!

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  6. Susie Clevenger19 August 2015 at 09:51

    Such melancholy...missing someone is one of the hardest things..

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  7. ZQ19 August 2015 at 18:44

    You captured it well.
    ZQ

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    1. Susmit20 August 2015 at 10:45

      Thanks R.K...A pleasure to have you here!

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  8. Sherry Blue Sky20 August 2015 at 21:18

    Oh this is very beautiful - what a wonderfully fresh choice of words.

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    1. Susmit21 August 2015 at 03:04

      Thanks for stopping by, and for liking this Sherry!

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  9. Unknown21 August 2015 at 09:21

    beautiful.... and welcome back :)

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    1. Susmit21 August 2015 at 14:40

      Thanks Archana! It's always nice to have you here....Yeah, got stuck a bit.

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  10. C.C.22 August 2015 at 03:48

    Love the imagery of gloom whipstitching something.....so creatively written!!

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