Sunday 24 May 2015

Sweetheart!



Black clouds of ennui
Restlessness of a fly
Synonymous with thee
Neither excited, nor doomed
Words fail to innervate

Your name, the Outlier
Queasiness nailed
Corneal spangle
Lather of Happiness
Love it is!
The variable, 
Quadrants fail to accomodate
Grows, 
And it grows, exponentially....



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24 comments:

  1. The first line captivated me totally... 'black clouds of ennui' ...and yes, love is that much powerful to transform even a depressing ennui into happiness... :-)

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    1. Words of appreciation from you is always special....Thanks Maniparna!

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  2. This is a beautiful love poem. It is very original despite the fact that there are so many love poems written. I enjoyed it very much.

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    1. I'll hold onto this comment for long.....Thanks Myrna!

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  3. beautiful Susmit... have you ever tried your hand at a Haiku?

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    1. Thanks Archana! I would love to, though a bit skeptical... Wonder, how you all do wonders, pouring your heart in those 3 lines. Brevity is an art, as they say.

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  4. Blunt...there are very few male bloggers who write awesome English poetry, Amrit was one that I was so impressed and yours is captivating...will come back for more. The language lucid and beautiful and ideas conveyed so well...applaud you Susmit :)

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    1. Oh my, this is one of the best I've received so far... it just cannot go better. An absolute pleasure, you stopped by. I'll keep on trying....would love to have you here more, Shweta!

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  5. Interesting... Lather of happiness!

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  6. I loved the opening lines to this exquisite poem.. it captivates the reader.. :) beautifully executed..!

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    1. Thanks Sanaa! Read your memoir at poets united, it was awesome.

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    2. Thanks for stopping by my blog :)
      Glad you liked the memoir! :D

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  7. How lucky we are that love does that!

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    1. Yeah, you need to be lucky to get the splashes of love....So glad, you stopped by, Rosemary!

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  8. Nothing can be better than love growing exponentially :-)

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    1. So nice to have you here, Amrit! Thanks for the kind words.

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  9. Amazing post my dear <3 !
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  10. Lovely poem with beautiful opening lines. Loved the expression 'lather of happiness' to describe love. :)

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    1. Thanks for the appreciation, Somali! So glad, you stopped by.

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    2. Thanks for the appreciation, Somali! So glad, you stopped by.

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  11. If it promises love and happiness, doesn't matter what proceeds it. Beautiful poem.

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    1. Thanks for the kind words, Saru! It's always nice to have you here.

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